Category Archives: Scribbles

Cancer Sucks

My NaNoWriMo has ground to a halt this week having lost my brother in law to cancer.  I do plan to pick it up again next week and will extend it into December but in the meantime I wrote this poem.

dealing with cancer
Cancer Sucks

Hancock’s Curse

It’s there inside,

a silent scourge.

Disguised as a native,

empty bamboo,

Breaking down defences,

crowding out life.

Scalpels assault,

gauling reprieve.

Chemical weapons raining down.

Vigorously resprouting,

rooted deep inside.

Unbiased Invader,

colonising my ecosystem.

My Hancock’s curse.

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Halifax man sentenced to only five years in prison after years of rape and abuse of young girl

Absolutely appalling.

The Belle Jar

TW for rape, child abuse, victim-blaming

There is a story in the Halifax Chronicle-Herald today about a woman who was sexually abused by her mother and her mother’s common-law boyfriend from the age of eleven. It started with the man coming into the girl’s bedroom at night and reaching up under her nightie to fondle her; she screamed for her mother, but her mother was too drunk to respond. When the girl was twelve, her mother – her own mother – coached her on giving blow jobs to this man. The abuse continued until the girl was fifteen, often taking the form of, in her words, a “sick threesome” with her mother and her mother’s boyfriend.

When the girl was fifteen she told her mother’s boyfriend that she would report him to the police. He told her that she couldn’t, because her mother was too deeply implicated. “How could you do this to your own…

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Killing off Characters and Magical Revivals

I’ve read a couple of books recently where characters were killed off only to then magically be brought back to life and I can’t decide how I feel about it.  My overwhelming feeling is that it’s a cop-out but I can’t deny a sense of relief if it happens to one of my favourite characters.  Thinking about whether there’s a right or wrong way to revive a character I began to consider the following questions?

What was the reason for killing them versus the reason for their revival?

The death of a main character has to be carefully dealt with and even more so if you plan on bringing them back.  If the story can’t continue without them, then why kill them in the first place?  Shock value alone is not sufficient.  Their death should mean something, change the world around them and the people within it.  Does bringing them back nullify that change making the previous chapters pointless or does the resurrection continue the anguish and change within the main and other central characters.

Does how they’re brought back matter?

There has to be some kind of foreshadowing, a believable reason for their resurrection. Yes you may have had a few random conversations with a goddess throughout your book but is she really going to step in and bring 6 people back to life just so you can wrap everything up in a nice happy ending.  Is cloning preferable to bringing back the original character?  The resurrection has to mean something more than the author just didn’t want them dead yet.  Coming back changed in some way opens up other plot lines.  what about time travel versus an alternate dimensional version of the character.  Where they really dead in the first place or was it all just a dream?  Dreams simply used to shock do not work.  They need to be used as a device to further the story.  How is the character affected by the dreams? Do they portend to a future event?

Is it more acceptable in certain genres?

Obviously fantasy is the place for magical revivals but is revival in general preferable in certain genres.  Is medical revival acceptable after taking the reader through the torment of death.  Is medical revival acceptable in a fantasy book or does the reader expect something more fantastic?

Does it affect how you engage with other characters in the novel?

Once you know they can be brought back to life the fear is no longer there.  What is the point in routing for a protagonist and experiencing the highs and lows and ultimately death if it doesn’t mean anything?

It only works if there is a clear story arc arising from the death and subsequent revival.  It must have purpose, it must be believable and the character must be changed in some key way.

 

 

How to write haiku

I’ll be honest, I’ve never really had much time for haiku.  They seemed too simple, childlike almost, until I tried to write one.

I understand the layout of a traditional haiku:-

Creating Haiku,

Five, seven, five syllables.

Juxtaposition.

and I know that I can make it less formal if I choose by altering the number of syllables etc. I know that there should be a format such as:-

First line sets the scene,

subject and action follow,

make it seasonal.

 

I can create a poem using such a few syllables and some that I actually like.  My struggle is in creating a juxtaposition with so few words.

Beat of rain brings life,

Earthy spirals in his wake.

-Circling predators.

Or,

Twinkling starlight,

streaking over rippled sea

-Naglefare’s voyage.

 

Needs work!

 

Who would choose a chicken?

If you were an animal what would you be?

If I could be any animal I think it would be a wolf.  They run as a pack and can take care of themselves.  Nothing is going to eat them and they can run fast.  I can’t run, never been able to and I might quite like that.  If I want to run fast though maybe I should be a Cheetah? But I’m not really a cat person.  Dolphins are fascinating but I don’t really like the water.  Too many things that can eat you.  I’d love to talk like a whale – especially if it’s anything at all like Dory in Finding Nemo.

Hmmmm….  I don’t really know what I’d be if I could choose but I I know in the event of reincarnation that there is one animal I’d turn down if I had the option.  The Chicken – they give birth every 25 hours.  What’s up with that!!